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Post by Anne on Aug 13, 2009 18:06:01 GMT -5
 ● THE USER OF THIS DELICIOUS CHARACTER IS Anne~, I'M 15 YEARS YOUNG, AND HAVE BEEN STRUTTING MY STUFF FOR THE LAST 0 YEARS. I JOINED THIS COOL SITE BECAUSE Actually, I've never roleplayed before, but I would like to try it and see how it's done. I saw it at the lj community and liked the plot, and I hope I'm not bad. . HAVE I READ THE RULES? READ THE RULESYEAH I HAVE! USUALLY I POST AROUND THE I... I don't really know? MARK. OH AND HERE'S A SAMPLE: People think Spain can't read the atmospheres and is distracted easily, but it's not really the truth. He likes to see that people actually believe this and how his students and colleagues try to take advantage at that, thinking they are really succeeding. He smiles at this thought while entering the gates of the school, with his briefcase (with a image of a tomato in it, obviously). He passes the gates, still smiling, like he always does, watching the students and its respectives gangs. Would they cause all that confusion like the students of the last year? Well, not that he liked it, but he believed that it was just the “children enjoying their youth”, like the principal always said. He sits at the nearest bench, still staring at the young nations, with now some teachers arriving. He sees France and Prussia and waves to them, remembering the time when they were students at this same school and did the same things the students do today. Hell, it was in that same year that the teachers begun to hit back , tired of the mess that the “ bad trio” did, usually involving England too. (And sometimes Austria, but usually it was only Prussia that wanted to annoy the hell out of him.) Spain would become melancholic every time he remembered what he once were, the conquistador, discovering new continents, conquering powerful peoples, forming colonies (These colonies,now their own countries, that now are cursing this same school.) Still with these things in his mind, he glances again at the people and gets up, going to join his old friends. |
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Post by Lithuania on Aug 13, 2009 18:22:05 GMT -5
Hey there!
We like your audition we only have a few requests before we can accept you.
Usually roleplay posts are written in past tense, so if you could fix that up for use, as well as lengthen your paragraphs just a little bit that would be great! Aside from a few grammatical mistakes overall it is great!
Just work on the above a little and you'll be good to go! Thank you for your audition, we'll be waiting.
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Post by Anne on Aug 14, 2009 12:29:56 GMT -5
I hopee it's better now...  |
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Post by Anne on Aug 14, 2009 12:31:06 GMT -5
● THE USER OF THIS DELICIOUS CHARACTER IS Anne~, I'M 15 YEARS YOUNG, AND HAVE BEEN STRUTTING MY STUFF FOR THE LAST 0 YEARS. I JOINED THIS COOL SITE BECAUSE Actually, I've never roleplayed before, but I would like to try it and see how it's done. I saw it at the lj community and liked the plot, and I hope I'm not bad. . HAVE I READ THE RULES? READ THE RULESYEAH I HAVE! USUALLY I POST AROUND THE I... I don't really know? MARK. OH AND HERE'S A SAMPLE: People think Spain can't read the atmospheres and is distracted easily, but it was not really the truth. He liked to see that people actually believe this and how his students and colleagues tried to take advantage at that, thinking they were really succeeding. Well, maybe he is a little distracted, but he could be very observant when he wanted to. He smiled at this thought while entering the gates of the school, with his briefcase (with a image of a tomato in it, obviously). He passed the gates, still smiling, like he always did, watching the students and its respectives gangs. Would they cause all that confusion like the students of the last year? Well, not that he liked it, but he believed that it was just the “children enjoying their youth”, like the principal always said. He sat at the nearest bench, still staring at the young nations, with now some teachers arriving. He begun to look for Romano, but probably the Italian hadn't arrived yet, it was too early and from what he remembered, it was very difficult to wake up the boy. He saw France and Prussia and waved for them, while remembering the time when they were students at this same school and did the same things the students do today. Hell, it was in that same year that the teachers begun to hit back, tired of the mess that the “ bad trio” did, usually involving England too. (And sometimes Austria, but usually it was only Prussia that wanted to annoy the hell out of him.) Spain would become melancholic every time he remembered what he once were, the conquistador, discovering new continents, conquering powerful peoples, forming colonies (These colonies,now their own countries, that now are cursing this same school.) Still with these things in his mind, he sighed, glanced again at the people and got up, going to join his old friends. He really was anxious for this school year. [align=center]this template was BITTEN BY BISCUIT!? at CAUTION 2.0![/center] |
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Post by Prussia on Aug 14, 2009 16:12:03 GMT -5
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000]ED! [/color][/size][/i][/font] Conngrats! You're Spain is, cute as he should be, and well done. You can now create an account and we hope you enjoy roleplaying with us! Since you're new at this, feel free to ask if you have any questions, or just look around at what other people are doing  [/center] |
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